Flash Fiction Press Presents

by June Lorraine Roberts on February 28, 2016 in Ramblings of a crime reader • 24 Comments

Picking Blueberries

Flash fiction inspired by a true incident

The Flash Fiction Press kindly picked up my story on February 25th.

I hope you enjoy it.

~ June Lorraine

Photo: Michael S. Thompson

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Richard Ankers

February 28, 2016 at 9:42 AM

Just read it, June. Very good, especially the ending. 🙂

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  February 29, 2016 at 10:09 AM
  
  Thanks Richard…the extra twist came after I thought I had the story finished 🙂
  
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  - Richard Ankers
    
    February 29, 2016 at 11:07 AM
    
    Shhh! Don’t give away your secrets 🙂
  - June Lorraine Roberts
    
    February 29, 2016 at 11:13 AM
    
    Hahaha!
vweisfeld.com

February 28, 2016 at 9:43 AM

Such an innocent title for such a dark tale! Congrats, June!!

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  February 29, 2016 at 10:10 AM
  
  I know..creating the title was part of the fun. Thank you!
  
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bizquig

February 28, 2016 at 10:03 AM

Gritty writing there, lady, but enjoyable. I don’t think I could cram an entire story onto one page. I’m too long-winded.
Congrats!!!

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  February 29, 2016 at 10:11 AM
  
  Thanks guy…yes you are long-winded
  😀 but a gifted storyteller
  
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  - bizquig
    
    February 29, 2016 at 8:15 PM
    
    Hey! I resemble that remark!
tanismallow

February 28, 2016 at 10:43 AM

Congratulations, you fabulous lovely dark writer, you!

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  February 29, 2016 at 10:12 AM
  
  Words to treasure, thanks my friend
  
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Sue Coletta

February 28, 2016 at 11:22 AM

Loved the voice, June. I left a reply on the site.

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  February 29, 2016 at 10:20 AM
  
  Thank you Sue, a great compliment
  
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Lynne

February 28, 2016 at 5:33 PM

Just opened this today……how do I go about getting your story……I’m intrigued!

Sent from my iPad

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  February 29, 2016 at 10:17 AM
  
  Hi there, just click on the underlined words The Flash Fiction Press and it will take you to my story. xxo
  
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kahwahtan

March 2, 2016 at 9:34 AM

Just read your tightly worded story….so much action and surprises with so little words…skillful

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  March 2, 2016 at 10:42 AM
  
  Thanks so much!
  
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Vicki

March 5, 2016 at 2:03 AM

Congratulations, June! A wonderfully dark and disturbing tale, June. You’ve packed a lot into so few words. Loved the twist, too. 🙂

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  March 5, 2016 at 2:03 PM
  
  Ohhh..thanks Vicki, means a lot to me!
  
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Virgilio Gavia

March 26, 2016 at 12:26 AM

Thanks for following. Nice site you have here.

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  March 26, 2016 at 11:14 AM
  
  Thanks! I hope you’ll drop by often
  
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Carol Balawyder

April 2, 2016 at 9:25 AM

June, I posted a comment under your story. 🙂

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- June Lorraine Roberts
  
  April 2, 2016 at 9:19 PM
  
  Just read it Carol…thank you!
  
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